Pitch Feedback.

We collected feedback from Miss Whitakker and the other five groups in our class:

2/6 =  It definitely has potential. 
4/6 =  Well on the way to success. 


The elements that work are:

- Good detailed ideas

- Use of Goodwin's conventions

- Detailed costume idea

- Good animatic

- Good locations

-  Good limousine organization

- Good ideology - Girl power without stripping and wild side

- Clear target audience
- Good image and costume ideas
- Structure of video - different elements should keep audience interested

 Things that need developing are:

- What will happen during the rapping?

- Need a group of people in the bar to create an atmosphere

- Record label?
- Consider saving one element to introduce 2/3 of the way through the video to hold audience interest.
- Logo?

 Things that don't work are:

N/A

We are happy with our feedback and glad that nobody feels that our ideas do not work. We have taken into consideration the aspects that people feel we need to develop and feel that our storyboard shows what will happen during the rapping. Also, many of the shots in the bar will be close-ups of us and the men and also of us performing so we feel that we do not need people in the background to create an atmosphere. The record label; Sony BMG, was stated during the pitch. We have taken the idea of saving one element for 2/3 of the way through to hold audience interest and decided to do this. Finally, we have completed our logo and will upload it to our blogs shortly.